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F – FEATURES AND BENEFITS

30th November 2009 by Paul Waddington

Sales training courses go to great lengths to ensure that delegates understand the difference between a feature (such as a flat screen for your computer) and a benefit (it takes up less space on you desk). Why is this? A key reason is that much sales literature continually gets it wrong. How often do you see lists like this:

The brand new MegaTron 5000 handheld offers you a range of benefits:

  • Durable titanium case
  • Full software suite
  • Integral modem

These aren’t benefits, of course — they’re features. Benefits get ignored for two reasons: features are new, exciting and whizz-bang (but often only to the writer); and benefits are more difficult to think up.

What, exactly, does the MegaTron 5000 do, then? To find the real benefit, just keep asking “so what?” until you say “aaaahh, I see”:

  • “It lets you work on the move.” “So what?”
  • “So you could, say, work from home or on the train.” “So what?”
  • “So you spend less time in the office and more time in the pub.” “Aaaah. I see.”

‘Spend more time in the pub with the MegaTron 5000’

It may not satisfy your product manager, but it could just appeal to customers.

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